Myself, My Clothes My Style

This week I worked on my writing work. Our goal was to make a piece of writing using persuasive words. We had 3 options for this piece of writing. Have uniform, don't have a uniform or trying to persuade Mr.Moriarty to get a new uniform for our new school. We have done lots of work. This is my work. Enjoy!

Introduction Hook : It's time to stand out from the crowd! What is the argument? I think people should have freedom to pick their own clothes.
	Elaborate, explain or give evidence
Main Point Paragraph 1 Find your bullies	Bullies won’t get away with things because they are wearing the same thing as others. You won’t get innocent people in trouble by accident
Main Point Paragraph 2 Show your own style	You can put yourself out there with your fashion You will know whether your friends like the same things as you by wearing a outfit
Main Point Paragraph 3 Guaranteed happiness	No one will be sad that they have to wear a uniform Everyone won’t complain because they picked their own clothes
Conclusion / Summary Overall I think that we should be free to choose what to wear because you can find bullies, we can show their own style and everyone will be happy guaranteed. So start a protest so you can be free to wear what you want when you want.

Title: Myself, My Clothes, My Style.

It's time to stand out from the crowd! I think people should have freedom to pick their own clothes. I also think people should be able to wear what they want because then you can find bullies easier, you can show your own style and everyone will be happy!

My first reason is you can find bullies easier. So say everyone is wearing uniform and someone kicks you and you get a teacher. Since everyone is wearing the same thing you might not find them and they could get off the hook. But say someone looks the same but they aren’t the culprit and are innocent, You might accuse them and they will get punished for something they haven't done. If everyone is wearing different clothes you could find the bully and they would get punished and no one would get accused for something they haven’t done.

My second reason is that you get to show your own style. Say you are all wearing the same clothes, how is someone going to find you? With your own clothes you can stand out and put yourself out there whether people like it or not. And you will be easier to find. Next say you want friends. How are you going to know whether you have any similarities and whether they will even be your friend! With your own uniform you can see people’s style by just a simple shirt or a stand out skirt. It’s good to be you when you want to.

My third and final reason is guaranteed happiness. So say everyone is wearing a uniform that people hate or despise. If you wear your own clothes everyone will be happy because they picked what they are wearing. But with a uniform everyone might be droopy by a pair of school pants. And if you wear your own clothes then you can show your freedom! Not everyone likes a uniform.

Overall I think that people should be free to choose what to wear because you can find bullies, you can show your own style and everyone will be happy guaranteed. So ask if you don’t have to wear a uniform so you can be free to wear what you want, when you want.