Gobstopper Experience Writing
I was a bit confused when my literacy teacher Miss (Cara) Mcleod told us we had to try a gobstopper. When I got my hands on a gobstopper the feeling was neutral because it was quite a sight but I didn’t know what to expect.
It smelt like two things a) flowers and b) blueberry. It felt as solid as concrete. It was a bit of a Aqua colour. Then I realized it was somewhere between cyan and turquoise blue. It looked like an aura sphere because of its round, 3d shape. It was as small as a mouse standing on cheese. It was as gravitational as a human because when it went up in the air it came tumbling back down.
Then it was time to taste it. Then and there I was as paranoid as a hippie. I felt like I was going to lose all my teeth. When I put it in my mouth It wasn’t so bad tasting. It tasted like a blueberry fresh and just grown. The more it was in my mouth the more it got smaller and changed colour until it was microscopic. Then I finally could bite it. It had lots of multi-flavoured backwash.
I loved tasting it because it was delicious and had great flavour, colour and texture and was really enjoyable.
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