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Thursday, 12 May 2016

Mintie experience writing

We are working on describing experiences. One of these experiences is tasting minties. This is my experience writing. Hope you enjoy it!




I was really, really, really dreading the fact that we had to taste horrid and ghastly minties. I did not enjoy the wait. But my taste buds are changing so maybe I’ll like it. But that remained in question.

When I got my hands on a mintie I did not know what to expect from it. I saw people having bad times. I thought what is that all about. I saw uneven lines and patterns. I could smell chocolate mints. Also it smelt like sweet bubblegum. I felt hard cobblestone with a protective layer of cold fur. It felt like a suction cup and I could see that on the sides to. It was quite normal for a wrapper of a unmatched lollie.

When I opened the wrapper it sounded like popping popcorn. I could see the shape was a rectangular prism. It looked like a block of ice. The scent of it smelt like fresh poison ivy. Smelt a little like mango. It felt like cobblestone just retrieved from a mine. It was as hard and cold as clay.

Then we tasted it. The more it moved round my mouth the more it evaporated. It had a tropical aftertaste which added a flavoured vibe. It felt like edible stone. In a way it was like getting my teeth flossed. The more I ate it the more softer and tastier It got. It  sounded like chewing pancakes and bacon at the same time. It was like bubblegum. When we finished I had a little mint in my breath.

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The minties were delicious. It was like tasting a chocolate mint milkshake. I loved tasting them because I really enjoyed tasting its delicious flavour!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mason,
    I am Fuatino from Rm 5 Christ the King School. I really like your writing about your minties experience.But next time, please make sure your capital letters are in the right place but anyways Great work!
    Christ the King
    Rm 5
    Fuatino.S

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