Mason, well done on getting the first two activities completed, and to a high standard. Your summary is very well written. However, it was very difficult to read due to the busy background. Make sure you consider your background when presenting your work. Sometimes less is more.
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Mason, well done on getting the first two activities completed, and to a high standard. Your summary is very well written. However, it was very difficult to read due to the busy background. Make sure you consider your background when presenting your work. Sometimes less is more.
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